Haha, it amuses me greatly what we're paying attention to in real life to figure things out. =P I've been wondering about how fast my eyes adjust too because of this. XD (And I was watching my brother's cats move around so I can get Kitkatsune right, haha... even though he's not a cat.)

The chocolate part connects really well with how you wrote it. :D

Hehe.

Aw, haha. Those lines aren't too terribly sappy... unless he gets sappier in the new parts that I haven't read yet. But those are definitely somewhat shippy lines. =P