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esp_dragon) wrote2012-01-14 06:01 pm
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A Small Complaint [Part 2]
Fandom: Legend of Sun Knight
Summary: Sun complains; the result isn't what he expected and definitely isn't what he wanted!
Rating: G
Contains: Nothing.
Notes: Taking details from the manhua (though this is from my memory, so if the description's wrong, it'll be changing once I can read it again)
Genre: General
Word count: 691
Status: Complete?
Sun glanced out his window, his eyebrows drawing in slightly and a frown tugging on his lips. Judgement was late; he was never late, usually arriving early to whatever appointment he was supposed to be at to make sure everything was in order before it started. Especially if Sun had been involved.
Hmm. Well, he had a spare piece of blueberry pie that he could eat in the meantime...
A couple of minutes later there was the familiar knock at his door and Sun wiped the crumbs away with the back of his hand. After dusting the stubborn bits that had persisted to stick to his skin anyway, Sun opened his bedroom door.
And stared.
Judgement sent him a resigned look, raising an eyebrow.
Speechless and gaping, Sun took a step back, allowing Judgement to enter. Along with Judgement's usual black-focused attire, Judgement now had additional wings sprouting from his back. They weren't the same as Sun's, black to Sun's pristine white, and instead of feathers, Judgement's were leathery like a bat's – though the scales and the wickedly sharp claws on both the top and at the tip of the spines more suggested a dragon. The small globe that sat neatly below the biggest claw looked worryingly familiar.
"What did you complain about?" Sun asked after he had closed the door. Sure, Judgement's accessories had been bigger (and Sun noticed Judgement had already cut the necessary slits to accommodate his wings. Which made sense seeing how many of Sun's clothes had to be trashed before they figured out what was too long and what was too short to be comfortable) but Judgement didn't complain about them.
"I didn't," Judgement said dryly. "Apparently if the Sun Knight has a pair of wings, then to make things equal and balanced, so should the Judgement Knight."
Sun burst out laughing. The buzz about him suddenly sprouting wings had eventually died down, but it looked like everyone was going to have something else to gossip about again. "At least people won't be trying to steal your feathers!"
He paused. Wait...
"The God of Light must favour you better!" he - didn't complain, pouting and crossing his arms.
Judgement's eyebrow (that had eventually went down) raised again.
"You don't have to preen your wings," Sun pointed out the obvious, waving at the wings on his own back. To add insult to injury, a couple of feathers drifted down from his movement. Muttering, he picked them up and stored them in the basket under his bed, to make sure someone didn't take one and start proclaiming they had the power of the God of Light. That had been a mess to clean up.
A small smile spread across Judgement's lips. "You'd rather us both have to fix each other's feathers in the morning?"
Sun blinked, mulling it over. "No, because that would take up even more time..."
"And you would have to wake up even earlier."
He grimaced. Ugh. No, thanks. "Okay, fine, it's better we both don't have feathered wings," he conceded. Judgement's wings looked cooler than his, Sun thought mulishly, and he wasn't going to have to worry about feathers falling out – but the Sun Knight with dragon wings? Sun snorted. Those two definitely didn't mix together.
Sighing, Sun turned his back, extending his wings, Judgement coming up behind him and they started to preen Sun's wings.
"You going to join me to see if you can fly?" Sun mused, running his fingers through his feathers. They'd tried a couple of times (well, Sun had; Judgement had patently watched) but it tended to garner too much attention wherever Sun practiced, and Sun didn't want it getting around that the Sun Knight fell flat on his face when he tried to fly. His wings could hold him, they knew that, but whenever Sun was in flight, a part of him panicked, sending his wings into a chaotic frenzy.
"As soon as we're done," Judgement promised, and Sun couldn't stop the grin that flashed across his face (though he did have a bad feeling that Judgement would take to flying like he had done to swordwork: perfectly).
Summary: Sun complains; the result isn't what he expected and definitely isn't what he wanted!
Rating: G
Contains: Nothing.
Notes: Taking details from the manhua (though this is from my memory, so if the description's wrong, it'll be changing once I can read it again)
Genre: General
Word count: 691
Status: Complete?
Sun glanced out his window, his eyebrows drawing in slightly and a frown tugging on his lips. Judgement was late; he was never late, usually arriving early to whatever appointment he was supposed to be at to make sure everything was in order before it started. Especially if Sun had been involved.
Hmm. Well, he had a spare piece of blueberry pie that he could eat in the meantime...
A couple of minutes later there was the familiar knock at his door and Sun wiped the crumbs away with the back of his hand. After dusting the stubborn bits that had persisted to stick to his skin anyway, Sun opened his bedroom door.
And stared.
Judgement sent him a resigned look, raising an eyebrow.
Speechless and gaping, Sun took a step back, allowing Judgement to enter. Along with Judgement's usual black-focused attire, Judgement now had additional wings sprouting from his back. They weren't the same as Sun's, black to Sun's pristine white, and instead of feathers, Judgement's were leathery like a bat's – though the scales and the wickedly sharp claws on both the top and at the tip of the spines more suggested a dragon. The small globe that sat neatly below the biggest claw looked worryingly familiar.
"What did you complain about?" Sun asked after he had closed the door. Sure, Judgement's accessories had been bigger (and Sun noticed Judgement had already cut the necessary slits to accommodate his wings. Which made sense seeing how many of Sun's clothes had to be trashed before they figured out what was too long and what was too short to be comfortable) but Judgement didn't complain about them.
"I didn't," Judgement said dryly. "Apparently if the Sun Knight has a pair of wings, then to make things equal and balanced, so should the Judgement Knight."
Sun burst out laughing. The buzz about him suddenly sprouting wings had eventually died down, but it looked like everyone was going to have something else to gossip about again. "At least people won't be trying to steal your feathers!"
He paused. Wait...
"The God of Light must favour you better!" he - didn't complain, pouting and crossing his arms.
Judgement's eyebrow (that had eventually went down) raised again.
"You don't have to preen your wings," Sun pointed out the obvious, waving at the wings on his own back. To add insult to injury, a couple of feathers drifted down from his movement. Muttering, he picked them up and stored them in the basket under his bed, to make sure someone didn't take one and start proclaiming they had the power of the God of Light. That had been a mess to clean up.
A small smile spread across Judgement's lips. "You'd rather us both have to fix each other's feathers in the morning?"
Sun blinked, mulling it over. "No, because that would take up even more time..."
"And you would have to wake up even earlier."
He grimaced. Ugh. No, thanks. "Okay, fine, it's better we both don't have feathered wings," he conceded. Judgement's wings looked cooler than his, Sun thought mulishly, and he wasn't going to have to worry about feathers falling out – but the Sun Knight with dragon wings? Sun snorted. Those two definitely didn't mix together.
Sighing, Sun turned his back, extending his wings, Judgement coming up behind him and they started to preen Sun's wings.
"You going to join me to see if you can fly?" Sun mused, running his fingers through his feathers. They'd tried a couple of times (well, Sun had; Judgement had patently watched) but it tended to garner too much attention wherever Sun practiced, and Sun didn't want it getting around that the Sun Knight fell flat on his face when he tried to fly. His wings could hold him, they knew that, but whenever Sun was in flight, a part of him panicked, sending his wings into a chaotic frenzy.
"As soon as we're done," Judgement promised, and Sun couldn't stop the grin that flashed across his face (though he did have a bad feeling that Judgement would take to flying like he had done to swordwork: perfectly).
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LOL (I am very amused because that's pretty much how I started part 16 of Bittersweet Sweetness - Sun talking about Judgment always being on time). XD
Hehe, don't go dropping crumbs in your bedroom now, Sun!
"I didn't," Judgement said dryly. "Apparently if the Sun Knight has a pair of wings, then to make things equal and balanced, so should the Judgement Knight."
XDDDD
Sun burst out laughing.
That's not nice, Sun. XD
*laughs at the image of people stealing Sun's feathers* Going out into crowds must be a pain...
To add insult to injury, a couple of feathers drifted down from his movement.
Even Sun's feathers are working against him. XDD
Muttering, he picked them up and stored them in the basket under his bed, to make sure someone didn't take one and start proclaiming they had the power of the God of Light.
Oh dear. XDDD That would've been a sight.
"You'd rather us both have to fix each other's feathers in the morning?"
That's quite an image. XD (I'm going "cuuuuute". And so want someone running into the scene)
Sun didn't want it getting around that the Sun Knight fell flat on his face when he tried to fly.
XDDDD That certainly would not be good.
"As soon as we're done," Judgement promised, and Sun couldn't stop the grin that flashed across his face (though he did have a bad feeling that Judgement would take to flying like he had done to swordwork: perfectly).
Heee, I love the ending. Yup, Judgment would probably get it right... XD;;
swordfighting in the air! aerial swordplay! coolness factor +1000!no subject
XDD Really? We share a brain so much. ;)
"Hehe, don't go dropping crumbs in your bedroom now, Sun!"
But it'll be - the wind generated from his wings will clean them away! Yeah! *snerk*
"*laughs at the image of people stealing Sun's feathers* Going out into crowds must be a pain..."
Sun has an even bigger following now! Literally! XDD
"Even Sun's feathers are working against him. XDD"
They have aaaalways been working against him. >D And I really should have more about the weight of these and how quickly Sun gets tired now. Hm.
"That's quite an image. XD (I'm going "cuuuuute". And so want someone running into the scene)"
Haha, I'm picturing...Earth. Blackmail material! ...Wait.
Sun: Go a bit to the left!
J: I already did.
S: Go more!
[...]
S: Harder? *purrs* Yeah, like that.
J: You complain so much.
S: Yeah, and how many times have we done this now?
Person outside the door (possibly Leaf or Storm): o_________________o;;;; I'll come back later...
*cough* And Sun would be making noises since Judgement's preening him and dies laughing. Would I have to rate it M for induendo (if I write this, but I think it's writing itself already XDDD) or just leave it as PG-13...? Hm. PG-13, I think.
"swordfighting in the air! aerial swordplay! coolness factor +1000!"
...That is an amazing image. *_____*
And omg, when the criminals find out Judgement has wings! Judgement from above! Nowhere is safe!! KJA;LSKJFA.
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That, and Judgment really is very punctual. Or seems the type. XD
How is it that Sun hasn't attracted ants yet... he even had dried meat under his bed. XD
*cough* And Sun would be making noises since Judgement's preening him and dies laughing. Would I have to rate it M for induendo (if I write this, but I think it's writing itself already XDDD) or just leave it as PG-13...? Hm. PG-13, I think.
Dear God of Light, this would be HILARIOUS. It would still be PG-13... I would think. XD Because nothing's really happening and if people imagine stuff... it's because of their imagination... XDDD And there are plenty of such situations in PG-13 series... XD
And omg, when the criminals find out Judgement has wings! Judgement from above! Nowhere is safe!! KJA;LSKJFA.
:DDDD
...though yeah, the normal citizens would be very scared indeed if Judgment took to flying. Nowhere is safe, seriously.
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Haha, if he's the opposite of Sun, who doesn't seem like he'd ever be on time for stuff he doesn't have to be...
"How is it that Sun hasn't attracted ants yet... he even had dried meat under his bed. XD"
...I'd say he already has. He just doesn't notice/care that there's ants there. DDD:
"...though yeah, the normal citizens would be very scared indeed if Judgment took to flying. Nowhere is safe, seriously."
Only in the underground/basement, but then you won't see him coming. >DDDD