Date: Mar. 14th, 2011 11:49 am (UTC)
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*finally comes back* I read this right away and was grinning so hard, but then I had to go do other stuff and now it's already so late. KLA;DJ;FA (I do not like our daylight savings... made me lose an hour!) It's so late now. My day and my nights are flipped. Again. >__>

"Uh, I'm Prince."
Aw, Lan. <3

Lantis Ilyushin also beamed at him.
... that name, gosh. XD;

And then Kenshin comments on the change in name, eee. As well as Prince wanting to call him Kenshin rather than Demon Lord. *___* Hey, I think both names are great improvements.

Aw, Lan is so hesitant with Kenshin here.

He nodded, then frowned as some information solidified in his mind, demanding his attention. He could not leave, not without... But that had been fulfilled, Prince had said.
Eee, I really love this paragraph, from this feeling that's compelling him, to those flickers of maybe-memory. <3

"It's okay," Sunshine said softly, his eyes gentle. "You can leave the cave - and you've done it before," he added.
*pictures Sunshine saying this* *melts* I adore Sunshine being reassuring! And then all this they have to tell him really brings it home how things are different.

His eyes wider than before, eyebrows raised, mouth open slightly. "You... wouldn't have told me that before." There was something in his voice that was different, that said that this was significant.
:O So first I squealed when Kenshin said "confused", and then my eyes widened when Prince pointed out that Kenshin wouldn't have said that before. (Cue more squealing). Kenshin must reaaally be confused.

... Maybe she should stop expecting Kenshin to be a certain way. If his memories were really gone (but they were going to see if they could fix that) then was it fair if they pushed Kenshin into a preformed mould of him? What if all they did was just make him act a role, rather than let him be himself?
It would not be fair at all, no. *__* Can I flail at Lan for being so thoughtful about this?

She knew Kenshin, not as much as Sunshine (she doubted anyone knew Kenshin better than him) but the way Kenshin acted -the way anyone acted- was from their memories and how they affected them.
Yessssss to this whole paragraph. :D (Sunshine knowing Kenshin best! People's actions affected by their memories! Kenshin still being Kenshin!)

Hahaha, Lan asking Kenshin about potions... XD;

"...Like the snow."
Ooooo, Kenshin has memory of snow!

So yeah, I was definitely flailing when Lan realized Kenshin shouldn't have remembered that.

Logging out!! Explaining to Kenshin. *___* Did Sunshine explain in the end?

"I... This is familiar, but I have never..." But that was not true, was it? Sunshine and Prince had both said he had done things that he could not remember doing and it was obvious now that his memories were fragmented and nearly non-existent.
I feel like giving Kenshin a hug, but that might not be wise. XD; He sounds so lost here! And he has no recollection of these things they're telling him about.

"You told me about the world outside when I asked about it, so now I'll tell you about the world outside."
I love this role reversal. <3

I think Kenshin and Sunshine on that seashell thing must make a pretty image. XDD

"Prince, you don't have to break off another piece," Sunshine said as he held out a gem that was about three times the size of his palm, "we already did."
BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA XDDDD OH SUNSHINE.

And then Kenshin commented that Sunshine didn't know why Prince wanted a piece of the door either. *dies laughing*

Sunshine had said that he would also enjoy seeing the fair sky again once they left; Prince had grinned and slapped him on the shoulder.
So cute!! I guess this reference went over Kenshin's head since he doesn't know Fairsky. :')

Whispers. :O Really like the capitalization in Stay and Wait.

He started walking towards them; he could look closely later - now it was time to go 'home'.
Home! ♥

So this chapter was what, 2000 words shorter than chapter one? Will the next one follow the same pattern and be 2000 words shorter? XD; I hope not! XD;
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