Discombobulate
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esp_dragonFandom: The Legend of Sun Knight
Summary: Sun just wants to be able to talk normally.
Rating: K
Notes: Written for the 'Discombobulate' prompt for 100rare.
I seem to be using the same summary style over and over. :P
It was sort of fun trying to make Sun talk on and on (though I failed). It took aaages trying to figure out what the heck to make Sun say though. Twooo hooours to write this~
Paragraphs are... funny here. I think there was a liiiittle bit too much talking in some points.
Genre: General
Word count: 619
Status: Complete
"It's nice weather we're having today," the priestess next to Sun commented.
Sun smiled brightly at her. He hadn't seen her around recently, but Sun had definitely recorded her before. "The God of Light has gifted us with so much of His benevolence today that it seeps into everything around us, making even the darkest shadows brighter under His influence." Sun turned his head away from the priestess, just in case it seemed like he was staring at her (which he was, but he wasn't supposed to love women, right? Not that it mattered where Sun was looking; he was still recording her anyway - huh, her skin looked healthier and more tanned than before. Had she been on holiday?)
"The radiance of His kindness has lifted the hearts of His children, making us feel more joyous of our lives."
The priestess was staring blankly ahead, and after a few seconds of silence, the priestess dug into her pockets and pulled out a few silver ducats. She mutely pressed them into Sun's palms before then scurrying away, her head bowed.
'It's not my fault!' Sun wailed in his heart. 'I can't help this stupid expectation of me means I can't talk normally!'
A few minutes later, Sun could hear the tramp of multiple footsteps in perfect synchrony. There was only one platoon that could walk like that. While Sun was happy that he'd be seeing Judgement, he wasn't so happy having to smile again so soon. Grumbling, he pulled up from his dejected slouch and stuck another wide smile on his face.
When Judgement saw him, he slowed down before eventually stopping, an eyebrow raised (well, not literally, but Sun knew him well enough that that was what Judgement would have shown, if they had been alone). "Have you not yet learned that it is through the God of Light's harshness that His children should live by?"
You were talking with a woman again, weren't you?"
"Ah, but can't you see His loving touch upon this day? Even you can surely say that He is kind for allowing the growth of the crops and feeding of the animals in different pastures?"
She talked about the weather! I had to respond!
The edges of Judgement's eyes crinkled up slightly, showing that he was fighting back a smile. "And those crops and animals may have been devoured while they were free, and that too would have been the will of the unforgiving God of Light."
Maybe you should avoid them.
Sun had to stop himself from rolling his eyes. Like he would do that. Even if he couldn't talk with them, he could still look at them. And if it meant he'd have to praise the God of Light and drive them away when they talked to him, he still had his recordings. But ugh, his cheeks were starting to hurt! Too much smiling already!
"They are protected by their farmers and their watchers, to ensure that no harm comes to them. Through their hard work, those children of the God of Light can then live on to the next day, taking what they need from the gifts that He gives them, and living their lives in harmony with His blessing."
Ha ha, very funny. At least I got some money for my retirement.
Judgement sent him a narrow glare while Sun parried it with an even wider smile. Dammit, it didn't feel like his cheeks were going to be normal after this. Thankfully, without another word, Judgement began walking away again, his platoon not a step behind.
Breathing a sigh of relief, Sun started to head back to his bedroom, hoping that no-one else would make him talk.
Summary: Sun just wants to be able to talk normally.
Rating: K
Notes: Written for the 'Discombobulate' prompt for 100rare.
I seem to be using the same summary style over and over. :P
It was sort of fun trying to make Sun talk on and on (though I failed). It took aaages trying to figure out what the heck to make Sun say though. Twooo hooours to write this~
Paragraphs are... funny here. I think there was a liiiittle bit too much talking in some points.
Genre: General
Word count: 619
Status: Complete
"It's nice weather we're having today," the priestess next to Sun commented.
Sun smiled brightly at her. He hadn't seen her around recently, but Sun had definitely recorded her before. "The God of Light has gifted us with so much of His benevolence today that it seeps into everything around us, making even the darkest shadows brighter under His influence." Sun turned his head away from the priestess, just in case it seemed like he was staring at her (which he was, but he wasn't supposed to love women, right? Not that it mattered where Sun was looking; he was still recording her anyway - huh, her skin looked healthier and more tanned than before. Had she been on holiday?)
"The radiance of His kindness has lifted the hearts of His children, making us feel more joyous of our lives."
The priestess was staring blankly ahead, and after a few seconds of silence, the priestess dug into her pockets and pulled out a few silver ducats. She mutely pressed them into Sun's palms before then scurrying away, her head bowed.
'It's not my fault!' Sun wailed in his heart. 'I can't help this stupid expectation of me means I can't talk normally!'
A few minutes later, Sun could hear the tramp of multiple footsteps in perfect synchrony. There was only one platoon that could walk like that. While Sun was happy that he'd be seeing Judgement, he wasn't so happy having to smile again so soon. Grumbling, he pulled up from his dejected slouch and stuck another wide smile on his face.
When Judgement saw him, he slowed down before eventually stopping, an eyebrow raised (well, not literally, but Sun knew him well enough that that was what Judgement would have shown, if they had been alone). "Have you not yet learned that it is through the God of Light's harshness that His children should live by?"
You were talking with a woman again, weren't you?"
"Ah, but can't you see His loving touch upon this day? Even you can surely say that He is kind for allowing the growth of the crops and feeding of the animals in different pastures?"
She talked about the weather! I had to respond!
The edges of Judgement's eyes crinkled up slightly, showing that he was fighting back a smile. "And those crops and animals may have been devoured while they were free, and that too would have been the will of the unforgiving God of Light."
Maybe you should avoid them.
Sun had to stop himself from rolling his eyes. Like he would do that. Even if he couldn't talk with them, he could still look at them. And if it meant he'd have to praise the God of Light and drive them away when they talked to him, he still had his recordings. But ugh, his cheeks were starting to hurt! Too much smiling already!
"They are protected by their farmers and their watchers, to ensure that no harm comes to them. Through their hard work, those children of the God of Light can then live on to the next day, taking what they need from the gifts that He gives them, and living their lives in harmony with His blessing."
Ha ha, very funny. At least I got some money for my retirement.
Judgement sent him a narrow glare while Sun parried it with an even wider smile. Dammit, it didn't feel like his cheeks were going to be normal after this. Thankfully, without another word, Judgement began walking away again, his platoon not a step behind.
Breathing a sigh of relief, Sun started to head back to his bedroom, hoping that no-one else would make him talk.
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Date: Jan. 20th, 2011 09:29 am (UTC)X3
XD I knoooow.
Yup. I think they might be terrified that he'll put them on trial for insubordination though. :( Either that, or a lot of them are pretty harsh on themselves/ don't take mistakes very well.